Echoes of Faith: In The Shadow of Giants| Flash Fiction

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In The Shadow of Giants


In the quiet town of Elderglen, North Carolina, Miriam Hale lives in the shadow of her legendary father’s legacy. But through humble acts of service and steadfast faith, she discovers that true greatness isn’t always loud—it listens, it stays, it believes. A heartfelt story about legacy, quiet courage, and the light left behind. Let the story speak to your heart—scroll down to begin.


Everyone in Elderglen, North Carolina, knew Thomas Hale’s name.
War hero. Builder of schools and churches. Preacher of fire and thunder. He'd once calmed a riot with nothing but scripture and a steady gaze. Folks said angels flanked him when he walked into town meetings. Even a decade after his passing, people still paused before his statue in the square, bowing their heads in reverence—or guilt.
And Miriam Hale could not escape him.
“Your father would’ve spoken up,” someone muttered when she didn’t raise her hand in the town hall.
“Thomas would’ve led the prayer,” they said when she stayed seated.
“Thomas Hale’s daughter, isn’t she?”
As if a name were a promise.
 As if legacy came without weight.
Miriam carried that weight in her bones.
She worked in the small office at First Light Church of Christ three days a week—filing forms, preparing sermons for the new pastor, and ordering communion bread. She wasn’t a preacher. Not a teacher. Barely a singer. And when she prayed, it was soft and unsure, more like a whispered question than a declaration.
Still, it was faith.
She found it in quiet things: the gleam of morning sun through stained glass, the scrape of folding chairs being set up for Sunday service, the shy thanks from a widow receiving a meal she’d delivered. Miriam had learned long ago that not all ministries needed pulpits.
But the whispers continued.
“Your father would’ve done more.”
That phrase clung to her like a shadow.
It was Mrs. Delaney who broke her routine.
The older woman arrived at First Light one Thursday morning with her husband slumped in a wheelchair and a tremor in her voice.
“Pastor Reed is away. But I need someone,” she said. “James… he doesn’t remember me most days. But sometimes, when we pray, he comes back.”
Miriam hesitated. This was not in the handbook.
“I’m not like my father,” she started, automatically.
Mrs. Delaney smiled gently. “Good. I asked for you.”
So Miriam sat beside the old man, awkward and unsure. She read a psalm. Then another. She sang a halting hymn. The old man stirred, blinked, and for a moment reached out to squeeze her hand.
Mrs. Delaney’s eyes filled with tears.
“He hasn’t done that in months,” she whispered.
Miriam said nothing. But something in her chest shifted. Not confidence. Not pride. Something older. Gentler.
Hope.
Word spread. Not fast, not loud. Just enough.
A teenager with anxiety asked if she could sit in the sanctuary when no one was there. Miriam unlocked the door and lit a candle for her.
An overworked single mother asked if someone could babysit while she filled out job applications. Miriam rearranged her hours.
She helped a widower find the hymnal his wife had once sung from. She drove a neighbor to Raleigh for a specialist appointment. She left loaves of cornbread on porches when no one was looking.
One rainy Tuesday, she sat with a young veteran named Chance who came into the church soaked and silent.
“I thought your dad would be here,” he said.
“He passed ten years ago,” Miriam said gently.
“I know. I just… I didn’t know where else to go.”
She made him tea and sat with him while he talked about flashbacks and nights without sleep. She didn’t quote Scripture. She didn’t give advice. She listened.
When he left, he said, “You’re quieter than him. But you’ve got the same eyes. Steady.”
None of it felt heroic. None of it looked like Thomas Hale.
But it felt right.
Then came the fundraiser.
A big, glossy event, planned to restore the community center. All the big names were attending. The mayor asked Miriam to speak. Said it would “mean something” coming from her. Legacy and all that.
Miriam practiced for hours.
But when she stepped onto the stage, lights blinding and microphone waiting, her hands went cold.
“I—I’m not the right person for this,” she said, voice trembling.
A ripple of disappointment moved through the crowd. She left the stage, her stomach in knots. People avoided her eyes the rest of the night.
At home, she sat alone in the kitchen, tracing the rim of her tea mug. Outside, cicadas buzzed through the warm air. She imagined her father sitting across from her, larger than life, a question in his eyes.
Why are you so small?
She almost believed he was disappointed.
Then she saw it—the letter. Folded into an old Bible, the one she rarely touched. It must have fallen from a drawer.
Miri,
 If you're reading this, then I’m gone. And someone, somewhere, is probably trying to make you into me. Don’t let them.
She blinked.
I was loud because I had to be. You? You always listened. You saw the people who slipped through the cracks. You stayed behind when I was out marching. That’s no less holy.
Don’t become me.
 Become you.
Dad
She cried then. Softly. Fully. Like a release.
The next Sunday, Miriam didn’t speak from the pulpit. She never would.
But she placed a small journal in the back of First Light Church titled Needs & Names. Anyone could write what they needed: a ride to the doctor, help with rent, someone to pray with.
Miriam read every entry. Responded to as many as she could.
A quiet ministry.
 A living faith.
One spring afternoon, ten years after her passing, the town unveiled a second statue beside her father’s.
Not marble. Not bronze. Just wood. Simple. A woman sitting on a bench, holding a journal in her lap.
The plaque read:
Miriam Hale
 She listened. She stayed. She believed.
Children played nearby, darting between trees. A neighbor laid a single white rose on the bench. Caleb stood at the back of the crowd, cap in hand.
And though her voice was gone, her presence lingered—in every small kindness that followed.

Echoes of Faith: The Weight of The Past| Flash Fiction

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The Weight of The Past

He’s been sober for nearly two years, but the silence from his daughter still haunts him. When forgiveness feels out of reach, can grace still find a way? This story explores redemption, regret, and the quiet power of a second chance. Read his journey below and discover what can happen when science meets the unseen.

It had been nearly two years since Darren last had a drink.

There were still moments when the urge would creep in—after a lengthy day at work, after enduring a heavy silence, or after she crossed his mind. Yet each time, he recalled the vow he had taken: to God, to himself, and to the daughter who hadn't talked to him since she was sixteen.

He sat on the edge of his bed, phone in hand, staring at the last text he’d sent her four months ago.

“Just wanted to say I’m proud of you. No pressure to reply. I’m here when you’re ready. –Dad”

The message had been delivered. Seen. No response.

Darren released a shaky breath as he browsed her public Instagram profile. He wasn't obsessing like he used to; he just wanted to make sure she was doing alright. She was in college these days, focusing on psychology. Occasionally, she shared photos of coffee mugs, sunsets, and friends unfamiliar to him. One picture from last week showed her laughing in a bookstore, and he found himself gazing at it longer than he intended.

He recalled bringing her to the library when she was eight years old. While she was inside, he dozed off in the car. Upon waking, he realized she was missing. The police eventually discovered her sobbing behind the building. She had waited and waited, then wandered away, believing he had abandoned her.

That was the first time she said, “I don’t trust you.”

She had every right.

Darren traced his thumb along the phone's edge, puzzled about why she had unblocked his number. Perhaps she wanted to check if he was still alive, felt sorry for him, or maybe it was an act of divine intervention—though Darren doubted that God would be involved in such matters.

He opened a new text. Typed. Erased. Typed again.

“You don’t have to forgive me. I just want you to know I’m still trying. Still sober. Still praying for you.”

He stared at it.

Then hit send.

The message went through instantly.

He laid the phone face down on the nightstand and leaned back against the wall, gazing up at the ceiling. His mind drifted to the cross his pastor had gifted him after receiving his one-year chip. It still hung by the door, sometimes feeling like an achievement, other times like a burden.

“God,” he whispered, “what if I’ve been forgiven by You… but not by her?”

There was no thunder or voice, only the hum of the fridge in the kitchen and the distant noise of cars driving by outside.

Still, he stayed there, eyes closed. Waiting.

The following morning, Darren found himself seated alone in the last row of a modest storefront church he had begun visiting every Tuesday night. It wasn't anything extravagant—just some rows of chairs, walls with chipped paint, and a table with lukewarm coffee by the entrance. Yet, it was the only space where he felt free from the shadows of his past.

This week’s devotional was led by a woman named Denise, someone from the recovery group who had a voice that was always gentler than Darren thought he deserved. She stood at the front with her Bible open, reading from Luke 15.

“While he was still a long way off, his father saw him and was filled with compassion for him; he ran to his son, threw his arms around him and kissed him…”

Her voice caught slightly on the word compassion, and she took a breath before closing the book.

“I used to think this story was only about the son,” she said. “But lately I’ve been thinking about the father. The waiting. The pain. The wondering if he’d ever get a second chance to love his child.”

Darren shifted in his seat, the breath catching in his throat.

“He didn’t wait until his son apologized,” Denise continued. “He didn’t demand explanations. He ran. He wrapped him in grace before a word was spoken. That’s how God loves us. And maybe that’s how we’re called to love too—even when the person we’re waiting on… doesn’t come back.”

Her gaze swept across the room without settling on anyone specific. However, Darren was convinced she glanced at him.

He dropped his head into his hands. His eyes burned.

That night, he didn’t text his daughter.

He didn’t check Instagram.

He sat at the kitchen table with an open Bible and a yellow legal pad, writing down the names of everyone he’d hurt—starting with her.

When he reached her name, he stopped.

Not because it hurt the most.

But because something in him said: This is where healing begins.

With a trembling hand, Darren circled her name on the legal pad, as if marking a boundary between the past and the future. He traced the letters of her name, feeling the weight of each stroke. It was a name that had once been spoken with tenderness, now carrying a heavy burden of regret and distance.

As he sat there in the quiet of his kitchen, he felt the weight of his actions settle around him like a shroud. The memories of missed birthdays, broken promises, and drunken arguments flooded back to him with a painful clarity. He thought about all the times he had chosen the bottle over his daughter, all the moments he had let her down.

But there was something different stirring within him now. A flicker of hope, a whisper of redemption. The words Denise had spoken at the church echoed in his mind, challenging him to love without conditions, to offer grace without expecting anything in return.

The sudden ringing of his cell phone jolted him from his deep contemplation

Darren didn’t recognize the number at first. Thought about ignoring it—like he did with most unknowns. But something in him stirred. He picked up.

"Hello?" Darren answered, his voice tentative.

There was a moment of silence on the other end, and Darren's heart began to race. Could it be her? The daughter he had been yearning to hear from for so long?

"Dad?”

The word pierced through the phone, sending a wave of emotions crashing over Darren. It was her. It was his daughter.

Tears welled up in his eyes as he struggled to compose himself. "Yes, sweetheart, it's me," he managed to say, his voice thick with emotion.

"I... I got your message," she said softly, her voice trembling with an emotion Darren couldn't quite place.

Darren's grip on the phone tightened. This was it. This was the moment he had been waiting for, hoping for. "I've missed you so much," he whispered, the words carrying a lifetime of longing.

There was a pause on the line before she spoke again. "I've missed you too, Dad,” her voice cracked, and Darren felt his heart shatter and mend all at once. They spoke for hours that night, dancing around the painful memories and tiptoeing into the future they both longed to be a part of. She told him about her classes, her friends, her dreams. He listened in awe, hanging on to every word as if it were a lifeline.

When the call finally ended, Darren sat in the dimly lit kitchen, the weight of regret replaced by something softer.

Hope.

He looked at the legal pad in front of him—the names, the past, the pain.

And he circled hers again.

This time, not in grief.

But in grace.

And for the first time in a long time, he believed that maybe...

this was just the beginning.