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| Lucy at the Steps |
Monty, a grieving widower whose Sunday routine is interrupted by an unexpected visitor: a quiet dog with one flopped ear and a patient heart. Through her steady presence, Monty begins to see that God’s grace doesn’t always knock—it sometimes waits. Scroll down to begin.
In Miami, the sun rose with a practiced brightness, warm even in October. Monty stood at the kitchen sink, letting the water run longer than necessary, just to hear something. His phone buzzed on the counter—CJ, right on schedule.
He dried his hands, answered.
“You headed to church today, Dad?”
“Yeah,” Monty said. “I’m getting ready now.”
CJ’s voice softened. “Okay. Text me after, all right?”
“I will.”
He didn’t mention that he'd nearly stayed in bed this time. That for ten months, he had gone mostly out of habit—since Vivian’s funeral, since the casseroles and the pitying looks and the awkward silences at fellowship hour. Sunday mornings had become the most hollow part of the week. But he kept showing up. It’s what Vivian would have wanted. She’d always believed healing happened in the going, even when you didn’t feel like it.
He pulled on the gray suit she used to press, though the crease had long since faded. Outside, the Miami air was thick with late-season humidity, and the jacaranda trees along his street rustled faintly in the breeze.
He parked in his usual spot at the small brick church, engine ticking as it cooled. And that’s when he saw her.
A dog—medium-sized, maybe a lab or hound mix, fur the color of worn leather—curled at the base of the church steps.. One ear flopped, the other alert. Not a puppy, not frail. Just… waiting. Her eyes lifted to meet his, soft brown and steady. She didn’t move. Didn’t bark. Just watched, like she was waiting to see if he recognized her.
He paused, hand on the door. Some part of him wanted to speak. Instead, he went inside, where the sanctuary still smelled of lemon oil and old hymnals. And grief.
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After the benediction, he hesitated near the back pew, pretending to study his bulletin while the sanctuary emptied around him. He hadn’t heard most of the sermon. Something about Jacob wrestling the angel—about not letting go until the blessing came. But Monty had stopped wrestling months ago. These days, he just sat still and waited for the ache to pass.
When he finally stepped outside, the sun had shifted behind a bank of clouds, and a breeze had crept in off the bay. The steps were empty. The dog was gone.
For a reason he didn’t understand, he felt that absence more than he expected. He stood there a while, longer than made sense, scanning the sidewalk, the edge of the churchyard. Nothing. Just a scrap of paper blowing across the lot and the sound of children laughing two blocks over.
He went home, texted CJ—Home. Love you.—and made himself a tuna sandwich he didn’t want. When he washed the dishes, he caught himself setting out a second cup.
Vivian’s.
He left it where it was.
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The next Sunday, Monty arrived ten minutes early. He didn’t admit—not even to himself—that he hoped to see the dog again. He told himself it was about traffic. The weather. Habit.
But she was there. Same spot. Same stillness.
This time, she sat upright, tail tucked neatly around her paws like a question mark. Her ears perked when she saw him, one still flopped like it had missed the cue. He slowed on the walkway.
"Morning," he said quietly, almost embarrassed.
She didn’t move—just blinked at him. Calm. Watchful. Unbothered.
A young couple walked past with a toddler in tow. The little boy pointed and chirped, “Doggy!” before his father nudged him gently along. Monty stayed for another beat, then climbed the steps and opened the doors.
As he moved down the aisle toward his usual seat near the back, Pastor Elaine caught his eye. She crossed the room with her usual no-nonsense stride, her robe swaying slightly around her ankles.
“Monty,” Pastor Elaine said, “I’m glad you’re here.”
“Habit, mostly.”
She smiled. “Sometimes the body walks before the heart catches up.”
Then she moved toward the pulpit as the choir began to tune up.
During the sermon, Monty found himself glancing at the stained-glass window on the south wall. It was the Good Shepherd window—Jesus with the lamb across His shoulders. Vivian had always loved that one. Said it reminded her that being carried wasn’t failure—it was mercy.
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After service, he exited slowly. Some parishioners smiled politely. A few touched his elbow or said they were still praying for him. He thanked them, meant it, and felt the gap between sincerity and connection.
The dog was still there. Waiting.
Someone had left a bowl of water, and a child—maybe the same one as before—was crouched nearby, whispering to her.
“She doesn’t have a name,” the boy whispered.
“Maybe she does,” Monty said, surprised to hear himself speak. “Maybe she’s just waiting for someone to ask.”
The child grinned and ran off as his mother called.
Monty stood a moment longer. Then his phone buzzed in his jacket pocket.
It was CJ.
CJ:
How was church? You doing okay today?
Monty:
Better than last week.
There’s a dog that keeps showing up here.
CJ:
Like a stray?
Monty:
No collar. Just waiting on the steps.
CJ:
Then it needs a home. Love you, Dad.
Monty stared at the screen. His thumb hovered. Then he typed:
Love you, too.
He slipped the phone back into his pocket and looked down the steps.
The dog stared back with quiet, expectant eyes.
He didn’t have anything to offer her. Not yet.
But he gave her a nod.
For the first time, she wagged her tail—slow and deliberate, like the start of a sentence worth finishing.
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The next morning, Monty sat at the kitchen table, CJ’s words still glowing on his phone screen:
Then it needs a home.
He read it twice more before setting the phone down. The words weren’t just about the dog. They echoed louder than that—into corners of the house that had been quiet too long.
He looked at the cup still sitting on the shelf—Vivian’s. He’d left it untouched for eight months. A kind of monument. A kind of pause.
He stood. Took it down.
His hand trembled slightly as he washed it. Dried it. Set it gently in the cabinet beside the good china. The sound of porcelain meeting porcelain felt like a door quietly closing without slamming shut.
Then he grabbed the dog food and bowl—still in the bag from the grocery store—and headed out.
-
She was there again.
Same step. Same stillness.
Lucy—he’d started calling her that—rose when she saw him. Not bounding. Just steady, tail moving in that cautious, hopeful way that still felt like a question.
He poured a small mound of kibble into the bowl and set it near the steps. She approached slowly, politely, as if aware this was sacred ground. When she ate, it was with measured gratitude, each crunch deliberate.
“You keep waiting,” he murmured. “Even when I don’t have much to give.”
She ate slowly, glancing up at him between bites. When she finished, she didn’t wander off. She stayed close.
He rested his hand on her back. The fur was coarse in some places, soft in others. Familiar now.
“You know,” he said, voice catching, “Vivian would’ve loved you.”
For a while, they just sat there. The world moved around them—cars passing, leaves shifting—but it felt like a still point in time.
He looked at the church door, then at Lucy.
“I think you’ve waited long enough.”
She tilted her head, and he stood. Opened the passenger door of his car.
“Come on, girl.”
Lucy hesitated for half a breath, then climbed in, circling once before curling into the seat like she’d always belonged there.
As he closed the door behind her, Monty whispered, “Thank You”—not to the dog, but to the quiet.
Grace didn’t knock. She waited. And now, she was going home with him.